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You don’t smile at me because you are happy to see me,
You smile because you want something.

You don’t say nice things to me because you believe them,
You say nice things to me because you want something.

You don’t buy me flowers after a fight to make me forgive you,
You buy me flowers because you want something.

You don’t call me every night because you want to talk to me,
You call me because you want something.

You don’t buy me random presents just because,
You buy me presents because you want something.

You don’t kiss me because you love me,
You kiss me because you want something.

You don’t make a [false] promise because you mean it,
You make a [false] promise because you want something.

You don’t really think that I’m pretty or smart,
You make me think so because you want something.

You want control.
You want me.
You want control over me.
Too bad for you, because I can see right through you.
I don’t want you.
Only I have control over me.
©2007-2009 ~piss08
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Author's Comments

I'm no poet, but it just came to me when I was watching t.v. the other night. Hope you all enjoy!

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:iconhikarishadows:
Really awesome work. i love it :clap:

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♫ So close your eyes
And say your prayers
Because I don't have any words
Left for you ♪ ~ Camui Gackt
:iconwinktothanatos:
awe thats so sadness :( but i like it
the repitiontion is nice in every line
whos this mean person who doesnot want you but wants somthing from you?? iLL FiGHT them! ;)
:iconpiss08:
awww thanks!! lol im glad someone likes it.
:iconfuckmehiamfamous:
:aww: So Great, I so liked it:clap:
:iconpiss08:
thanks! and thanks for the add!!
:iconabrainthatleaks:
:s control is such a terrible thing! You do a great job conveying these themes... I'm gonna have to watch for more :)

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Life is extrodinary in the mind...
Everywhere else you have to settle.
:iconpiss08:
lol thanks. sometimes this stuff just comes to me and i have to write it down. thanks for the add! :o)
:iconabrainthatleaks:
It's the same with me :) I have to write or I'll go even more insane! LOL

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Life is extrodinary in the mind...
Everywhere else you have to settle.

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